I enjoyed that. I don't quite know what to make of Johnny/Muhammed. It seems as if in many ways he does the same thing to others (calling the other character "boss) as he dislikes about people doing to him. Of course, I've never walked a mile in his shoes so I don't know how I'd feel in his place. Good ending though. You didn't take the tempting out of drawing it together with some neat platitude. You just let it be what it was.
CG: that's good news, because platitudes always tempt me. i think johnny has basically molded himself into the stereotypes people have framed him with.
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I'll check it out.
I enjoyed that. I don't quite know what to make of Johnny/Muhammed. It seems as if in many ways he does the same thing to others (calling the other character "boss) as he dislikes about people doing to him. Of course, I've never walked a mile in his shoes so I don't know how I'd feel in his place. Good ending though. You didn't take the tempting out of drawing it together with some neat platitude. You just let it be what it was.
I have downloaded said object, and will burn to CD for the (m/p)atrilinears -- provided I have the author's permission of course.
CG: that's good news, because platitudes always tempt me. i think johnny has basically molded himself into the stereotypes people have framed him with.
Furbottle: thanks. you do.
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